• FreeVerse: Sadie and Maud by Gwendolyn Brooks

    by  • 01/06/2010 • Poetry • 9 Comments

    Hosted by Cara over at Ooh Books

    During college, I took a wonderful course in African American Poetry. It introduced me to such poets as Langston Hughes, Rita Dove, LeRoi Jones (Amiri Baraka), Nikki Giovanni and Gwendolyn Brooks. Today, I thought I’d share one of the poems I loved when I first read it.

    Sadie and Maud
    by Gwendolyn Brooks

    Maud went to college.
    Sadie stayed at home.
    Sadie scraped life
    With a fine-tooth comb.

    She didn’t leave a tangle in.
    Her comb found every strand.
    Sadie was one of the livingest chits
    In all the land.

    Sadie bore two babies
    Under her maiden name.
    Maud and Ma and Papa
    Nearly died of shame.

    When Sadie said her last so-long
    Her girls struck out from home.
    (Sadie had left as heritage
    Her fine-tooth comb.)

    Maud, who went to college,
    Is a thin brown mouse.
    She is living all alone
    In this old house.

    I always thought Sadie got the better end of the deal, despite the two children out of wedlock and not living as long as Maud. To me, the line “Sadie scraped life/With a fine-tooth comb” meant that Sadie got the most out of lifeleaving nothing untouched or undoneand passed this admirable trait to her daughters. I always thought I’d rather be a Sadie than a Maud. How about you?

    9 Responses to FreeVerse: Sadie and Maud by Gwendolyn Brooks

    1. Jenners
      01/11/2010 at 12:44 am

      Maud all the way, baby! But I like your taste in poetry.

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      01/09/2010 at 1:46 am

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    3. Jenners
      01/07/2010 at 12:39 am

      I like this. And I totally agree–sounds like Maud isn't too happy.

    4. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 9:07 pm

      Definitely Sadie for me…I want to scrape all of life I can with a fine tooth comb even if it means bad with the good!

    5. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 8:11 pm

      I think Sadie got more out of life than Maud did, but which one would I want to be? Maybe Sadie but with a college education (maybe if she had lived longer, she would have taken that chance).

    6. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 5:01 pm

      Who wouldn't rather be a Sadie?

      My favorite Rita Dove poem? The Glass…I'm probably being morbid, but it reminds me of when I cared for my dad as he was dying of cancer.

    7. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 4:58 pm

      It seems the author thought Sadie got the better end of the deal too. I don't think I'd want to be on either end of that spectrum but I think I'm Maud. Maybe that's changing.

    8. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 4:53 pm

      I too like accessible poetry (in other words, ones where I know what is
      being said). Doing this FreeVerse meme is helping me to overcome my own
      poetry phobia. And I do think this poem says life is for living … not for
      sitting and playing it safe.

    9. Jenners
      01/06/2010 at 2:39 pm

      I love Gwedolyn Brooks. Her poetry seems so accessible, even to a poetry-phobe like me. (I'm working on that phobia, by the way.) I like the way Sadie's comb found "every strand": the good and the bad that life has to offer. I guess if you're going to really live life, you're going to experience a lot of good and a lot of sadness….no way of escaping it unless you hide from life like apparently Maud did.

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