FreeVerse: Celebrating "Amateur" Poets
by Jenners • 04/13/2010 • Poetry • 12 Comments
Hosted by Cara at Ooh…Books!As you probably already know, April is National Poetry Month. Serena over at Savvy Verse & Wit has organized an amazing poetry blog tour that will be going on all month. Since Serena pretty much has so many of the “professional” or “published” poets covered, I thought I’d use my April FreeVerse posts to focus on “amateur” poets. Now, don’t get me wrong; I don’t mean “amateur” to mean “unprofessional” or “not good.” Rather, I’m using this definition:
Amateur: A person who engages in an art, science, study, or athletic activity as a pastime rather than as a profession.
In other words, I’m going to spotlight poets who are unpublished and regular folks like you and me. Frankly, I think many of the poems and poets I am going to share with you are just as good as anything you might find in a poetry book. Each week, I’ll spotlight two “amateur” poets and tell you how I came across their work.
The first poem comes from my friend Michael5000 of The Life and Times of Michael5000. Back when I was publishing my zine, I asked my readers if they would send in some original poetry. The following poem is what Michael submitted, and I thought it was good then and I think it is good now. (Note: Michael5000 has no idea I’m publishing this. I sure hope he doesn’t mind!)
Symbolism (For Kelly)
by Michael5000
she walks like a prussian corporal carries her cheshire cat
along the river staring at the lizards in their wild west hats
a one-armed anarchist spanish priest on the issue of realism
She doesn’t like symbolism
she hums an irish wedding hymn unlocks her brass-bound door
chases the fox from the shattered clocks melting on the floor
she likes to flaunt the bust of kant but can’t read syllogism
She doesn’t like symbolism
she dons her aqua funeral shroud thinks about the saints
the wind it blows and the thunder rolls like a drum as she starts to paint
a crucifixion of richard nixon in pink abstract expressionism
Don’t call it symbolism
And just think: Michael was in his early 20s when he wrote this! Impressive, no?
And coming full circle, the next poem comes from a blog that I had never visited until Michael5000 sent me a link to this poem last week saying “You might enjoy this. Or not.” The link was to a poem from a blog written by Rosemary Kirstein. (Ms. Kirstein is a published author of four novels called The Steerswoman Series. She has also published some short fiction but didn’t have any information about it on her blog.) Anyway, I loved the poem and asked Ms. Kirstein if I could feature it in one of my FreeVerse posts, and she was kind enough to agree. Her poem was inspired by a Wallace Stevens poem titled Thirteen Ways of Looking At A Blackbird, but her poem deals with one of the evils/pleasures (depending on your viewpoint) of the 21st century—Facebook. (And I hope I haven’t offended Ms. Kirstein by calling her an “amateur” since she is a published writer!)
Thirteen Ways of Looking At Facebook
by Rosemary Kirstein
I
Your farm does not exist.
You puzzle me.
II
I was of three minds,
Facebook, Twitter, and blog.
But it was only one post,
Like a blackbird
Sitting in three trees at once.
III
Sixth grade lunch hour
Cafeteria.
Decibel level = 110.
All my friends are talking at once,
But not to me.
IV
Twenty years ago, you dumped me for no good reason.
IGNORE
V
Hello, my new friend.
I see you have become a fan of XX==>DDD.
Now, what page is that?
click
I see.
Yes, those breasts are quite large.
REMOVE CONNECTION
VI.
Eighteen years ago I dumped you
For very good reasons.
IGNORE
VI
My Fan Page is ready
One click away from Live.
click
Oh, look, I have a fan, huzzah!
No, wait, that’s me.
VII
My personal account has 32 friends.
My fan page has 7 fans.
I now understand my royalty statements.
VIII
I do not believe these are the End Times,
Nor that God has a plan for me.
I do not care that you are in an open relationship.
But my fan page is open to everyone,
And you may stay.
IX.
I commented.
I saw my comment on three pages.
Three circles of which I am the edge.
X
I’ve known you all your life
But I never knew you liked that song,
that singer.
And you never knew that I sing.
XI
They are all here
The mountebanks and preachers,
The grade-school crushes and bullies.
We find, and we are found.
But do you see the distance I have run,
or my shadow?
XII
We speak, addressing no one in particular
and wait for comments.
Where is this river going?
Where does the blackbird fly?
XIII
It was 3AM all night.
I was writing
and I was going to write.
I used a pen
And I was alone.

Oh yeah, I like both of those, but the FB one hits a chord, especially.
Great idea to feature "amateur" poets!
I think both poems are good, but in different ways.
Michael's amkes me think about what it means, but the effort is definitely worthwhile.
As for Rosemary's facebook poem, it is definitely one that most of us can relate to!
I'm a big fan of Michael's poem and am glad I looked in from Cara's link.
Great idea to feature amateur poets!
quidrock
I love both these poems, but especially the facebook poem. It should definitely be published somewhere.
love the selections today–especially the one about facebook. so true
I love both of these poems. They are beautiful. Thanks for sharing these and other Amateur poets this month. I hope you will be linking these to my National poetry Month Blog Tour Mr. Linky. I think they would be a wonderful addition.
These were both wonderful, but since I'm not into FB, I think I like the first better.
I like the direction you chose to go this week!
Such great poems. I particularly liked how Michael's flowed so well but it was the FB poem that I really enjoyed – probably because I could see parts of myself in the words.
Oh, for…
They are both great, but I think everyone can probably relate to the experiences noted in the Facebook poem. So much fun to read!
I vote for Michael's – I love it! And great idea to feature "amateur" poetry!
Michael's poem is great but I love Ms. Kirstein's poem! It is so true! Blog, Twitter and FB. Oh my!